Monday, December 5, 2011

Katakana Literary Work (Final)



These are my 3 haikus. I decided to keep my haikus on Doraemon and Christmas, but I wrote my last one on winter time and cider, since it's already December.  Please enjoy! 



ドラエもん
ロボットのねこ

ゆうしゃです。

クリスマス
はすきなときで
しあわせよ。


ふゆのとき
あついサイダー
をのみます。
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7 comments:

  1. Soo Jung LeeDecember 7, 2011 at 10:50 AM

    ドラエもんは　とても　かわいです！

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  2. EmilyDecember 7, 2011 at 10:55 AM

    The spacing on the first one needs to be fixed, just fyi. :3
    ドラエのがかわいいですね！クリスマスがおもしろいです。すきです。ゆきがほしです！

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  3. ジャスティン　ハモンドDecember 7, 2011 at 11:07 AM

    サイダが大好きです！はいくはよかったです！

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  4. DanDecember 7, 2011 at 11:14 AM

    isn't it bending the rules if you move the を to the line below ? haha
    nice work otherwise!

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  5. duckyDecember 7, 2011 at 11:44 AM

    The second one is my favorite for its simplicity - that last line of しあわせよ is perfect in eliciting this kind of なつかしい〜 feeling of Christmas.

    (The pictures are also a great touch!)

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  6. D.ChoiDecember 7, 2011 at 1:18 PM

    あなたの　はいくを　よみましたから、今　ドラエもんを　みたいです。

    I like the choice of your topics! And I agree with what most of the people have said above, the second haiku is very soothing.

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  7. AnonymousJanuary 19, 2012 at 9:53 AM

    Stephanieさんこにちわ！

    おげんきですか。

    ふゆやすみはどうですか？どこでいきましたか？

    たのしいですか？

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